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 -I am really obsessed with this author's ear and cadence. The word choice in this story alone feels kind of inimitably beautiful, like an authorial calling card  

-There's a profound sense of both coziness and aptitude in much of the prose here - it's lyrical, precise, and compelling. I could read prose like this for hours 

 This story has a simple elegance, commanding respect and reverence. Your words and pacing are crafted exceptionally well.  

 This story is gorgeously written and tugs at the heart. It has the earnest simplicity of a genuine folktale, a rare feat.  

omgomgomg this was one of my favorite stories in duels. I'm so glad you shared this, everything about this is so gorgeous and folk-talesy and I just adore it.

I'm in tears? This wasn't what I was expecting at all. This is just so perfectly heartbreakingly written.

-Masterclass in propulsive storytelling

- Every sentence helped to advance the plot, and the story was well-paced with a clear beginning, middle, and end

This story does an excellent job of combining sharp satire with a tense and compelling plot. 

"Second Chances" is a relentless story that starts with its foot on the gas pedal and maintains that atmosphere until its finish.

-You do a wonderful job of showcasing dynamic language/descriptors throughout

-You drew on historical details skillfully to create a vivid picture of 17th century England

Pink Planner is a profound romantic comedy microfiction.  

You've clearly done research on your setting, and your prose is excellent and polished. Your sentences are wonderfully crafted, and you have some excellent comparisons that make your writing sing.