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Beneath the Willow
The River's Daughter
The River's Daughter
This story has a simple elegance, commanding respect and reverence. Your words and pacing are crafted exceptionally well.
The River's Daughter
The River's Daughter
The River's Daughter
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This story is gorgeously written and tugs at the heart. It has the earnest simplicity of a genuine folktale, a rare feat.
Sun Thief
The River's Daughter
1995, A Good Year
omgomgomg this was one of my favorite stories in duels. I'm so glad you shared this, everything about this is so gorgeous and folk-talesy and I just adore it.
1995, A Good Year
1995, A Good Year
1995, A Good Year
I'm in tears? This wasn't what I was expecting at all. This is just so perfectly heartbreakingly written.
Siberian Betrayal
1995, A Good Year
Siberian Betrayal
-Masterclass in propulsive storytelling
- Every sentence helped to advance the plot, and the story was well-paced with a clear beginning, middle, and end
Wiped Out
1995, A Good Year
Siberian Betrayal
This story does an excellent job of combining sharp satire with a tense and compelling plot.
Second Chances
Second Chances
Second Chances
"Second Chances" is a relentless story that starts with its foot on the gas pedal and maintains that atmosphere until its finish.
War for Souls
Second Chances
Second Chances
-You do a wonderful job of showcasing dynamic language/descriptors throughout
-You drew on historical details skillfully to create a vivid picture of 17th century England
Pink Planner
Second Chances
Who She Became
Pink Planner is a profound romantic comedy microfiction.
Who She Became
Who She Became
Who She Became
You've clearly done research on your setting, and your prose is excellent and polished. Your sentences are wonderfully crafted, and you have some excellent comparisons that make your writing sing.